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Poetry Briefing
I should have written a shorter verse, Where a couplet’s too verbose – As slim as is a haiku terse, Or a limerick at most. A sestet tops, or a triolet, Or a nonet’s fading ghost – As tightly as a minuet When sent by pigeon post.
I never should have waffled-on Beyond the break, you see – All trace of pithiness was gone, As the twelve-bar blues run free. If sonnet-length should not be crossed, I should curtail this spree – But no – I fear all hope is lost As the ballads call to me…
This, apparently, is the lyric sheet for Lose Yourself by Eminem
Throw your Hands in the Air till it Cuts like a Knife
Musicians’ lyrics are words for music, An afterthought to fill the tune. And that’s what makes them words of int’rest, Knocked-up quick, and none too soon ! Musicians’ lyrics, they’re corny or woozy, But always organic in self-expression – Their very essence is always the quintest – When forged in the deadline of ending the session. Musicians are never librettists, They never write words to stand alone – They’re woven into the very chords, Their voices are played like a saxophone. Musicians’ lyrics are hard to resist, They’re what turns a tune to a song. They master what poets are groping towards, When the audience all sing along.
Note that this poem is about bands who write their own songs, not about professional songwriters who often have individuals working exclusively on the words. It’s intended as a celebration of those musicians for whom the words are simply less important than the tune.
Ev’ry poet, given long enough, Will name a poem this – Some to relish the Schrödinger’s title, Or one as subtle as a hiss, Others who simply forget to attach one, Or choose to leave it still undone, But ev’ry poet will try this bluff In the final analysis. Perhaps it’s there, but printed in white ? Perhaps they couldn’t think what to write ? Perhaps the only copy to spare Has suffered a tear, or a bookworm’s blight ? Or scratched into a wall, in rough, In some forsaken abyss. But now they sit unheralded upon the bustling page, With nothing to grab our eyeballs and engage – We’re on our own. They’re standing naked on the stage, Relying on their lines alone – Straight to business, no quick kiss To say hello and set the tone. Yet ev’ry poet, given long enough, Will give a name a miss.
They told us that at school, And we read some Hiawatha, Then some Milton and some Armitage – You know the stuff. I shrugged, and ploughed along To some Ezra Pound or other, Feeling overwhelmed by culture Till I just switched-off.
I guess it works for those for whom it works, But all I found was faff – It might as well be scat or freeform jazz For all I cared. I needed rocking rhythms in verse, And lines that didn’t break in half, I needed souls that used a regular rhyme When they were bared.
They told us that at school, And they dared us to disagree – And they’re telling us still, with tuts and sneers And humourless debate. But we know what we like, and some of us like For our verse to be less free – So poems don’t have to rhyme, I guess, But when they do, they’re great !
“Poetry editors are in revolt against the overuse of certain florid words.”
– Poetry How
Cliches seep into my verse, Those myriad shards of shrouded thought – Reflections on the torrid motes I nurse, So pent and overwrought. I strive to excise each as it freights Through my ever-cloistered, fevered mind, Yet their crimson soul still percolates To leave a palimpsest behind.
I can remember learning at school The poems I had to learn by heart – And yet I cannot recall them now, We’ve slowly drifted apart. It’s a shame, Because some songs demand our remembering, Work all the better when read heads-high, With eyes in contact, and tongues in confidence, Proudly aloud and never to be shy.
Sometimes, when I’m writing a line, I think of someone decades hence – Someone having to learn it at school, Trying to make it make sense. I’m to blame, Because good luck committing me to memory, With all of my showing-off to distract. I’ll try to keep it short to make things easier, Hope you can make it to the end intact.
But pray, allow me one more verse, To make my case, one hit-or-miss. And if you stumble, I shall not mind, I’ve mangled far better than this. All the same, In those moments when it all comes together, When the words are at the ready to be read – I wish I could remember like I hope you can remember, For no poet wishes to remain unsaid.
Plenty of poets who only learned English later Have plenty of English to tell, Which makes all their poems so very much greater – When using their step-mother tongue so well. But usu’lly, they’re only in free verse, it must be said, Not often in rhyme – (Unless they are writing in pop instead, Cos that happens all the time !)
I asked for a poem from the algorithm – It took the simple prompt it was given, And after thinking a second or so, The words began to flow…
And they were bad, man, Really bad – The scribbling of a mixed-up lad. Cos the thing with greenhorns, They lack know-how, But think the world must hear them now… Till one day, we’ll all look back and laugh, At AI’s opening paragraph.
Sure, they had rhyme and they had rhythm, Verse by verse, the cursor driven, Never knowing when it said enough, Just filled the screen with stuff…
But this was bad, man, Really bad – The first draft of an undergrad. Cos the thing with students, Is that they learn, Just practicing until their turn… Till one day, a beautiful work of art From a Turing Test will break our heart.